I learned way more about vampires in one night than I ever wanted to know in the space of ten lifetimes. o_O I hate to say this, but it was kinda intriguing. I mean, there were vampires before Twilight, people..... they were actually interesting once. :P They're actually pretty sad. I want to write some weird redemptive vampire story now.....
Anyway, it was brought to my attention that Fabian realizes his vampire-ness too quickly/easily. And I agreed. I just wasn't sure how to alter that.
But thankfully, there exists such a thing as Google Search :)
Thanks to wikipedia and a few vampire-edia sites, I was quickly updated on all things vampirical. I then applied that and altered the first scene after he wakes up.
I'm not going to say anything stupid like, "Now it's perfect!" But I certainly think it's a start.
A little better, maybe???